Pippatchu's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[My First Flash Game Ever]

Quite nice...

The levels were pretty nicely made, the music upped the mood a little, but i still haven't found anything to seperate this from every other "first flash game".
Next time, take some time in polishing up some of the artwork, or adding extensions as upgrades, power-ups, enemies or other stuff to keep the player playing, and add some variation to the game. I know how tempting it is to upload a flash after working very hard on it, but be honest with yourself and try to look at the game from the average viewers' perspective, and see for yourself wether it's worth uploading or not.

I hope this helped a little.

[Jack's Demo V.2]

Hmmmm

sounds like an awful case of copy and pasta to me...
what kind of thingf exactly is the player?
And what are the witches doing there?
The gameplay was easy as hell and the code seemed like, as i said before, an awful case of copy-and-pasta.

[BackBack]

I don't like this.

The graphics and the gameplay both are rather bland.
After a while the game gets really repetive and boring.
It also seems like actionscript copied from some tutorial, as i've seen alot of these games. Yet i kept in mind, that you may just have made this all by yourself, as i still give you a five out of ten. Next time you make such a game, at least make the graphics somewhat more interesting and add some powerups and variation.
Next time try using some more colors. You don't seem to know that the use of only black and white mostly bores the player.
It rather bothers me that you didn't read any NG Forum rules, as you posted a thread a while ago, advertising this game. Which is, of course, violating the rules of the BBS (forum).
I really suggest you do something with criticism with in this post and the ones below.
Good luck!
5/10 and 2/5.

Kirl responds:

No tutorial Pokeman, some people still read books, they contain more general knowledge. You can apply this knowledge in everyday life, in much the same way that you don't.

I suggest you read through the forum rules once or twice yourself as you seem to make them up as you go. You can read through them here: http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/rules.h tml

[Graffiti The Mona Lisa]

I agree with azreth...

i don't know how you managed to spent a whole week making this,
It's a low-res picture of the mona lisa with a (probably) copy and pasted code, you should have added color or something, brush size, opacity, that stuff.
I don't see how this is fun. Spent some more time, or at least let your flash have some features that other flashes don't have. be original.

tomashcu responds:

yeah... i on y worked on it for like 10 mins a day ahahah thats why

[Cow Sim 2009]

One word: epic.

press ctrl + space to get berserk. then you need to go eat the farmer. The go to the slaughter house and slaughter the butcher by spamming punch - kick - 2x icy wave - 4x Boiling lava - hold kamehameha - release at about 5.2778 - done. That should get you through level 9. Also, @G4spider, just press the M key 40 times within 1 minute after beating the one-eyed spider while controlling the ice golem mechanical.

[Zap Brian]

Nice little game.

This shows your capable of making a decent flash, as you did everything by yourself.
But, you'll have to make something bigger then this to pass the good ol' judgement.
Your good, however it's just to small.
Have patience, my friend, make something bigger, and you'll get a >3.00 score.

peteybizzle responds:

Thanks for the input, good sir. With any luck, this just represents my first toe in the waters of flash gamery. I just wanted to test the waters, see what I could do before I attempted anything too big. Of course, now that I've done so...

[Jump Over Stuff 2]

it == ok

var difficulty == >9000
var difficulty Maybe: somewhat lower
}else{
too hard.
var menu == awesome
if (somewhat easier){
var game == awesome
}

[Heavy Weapons]

Great!

It's a combination of having godly powered weapons, but still challenging!
Keep it up!

[Space Beats]

A decent rythm game.

It's good and all, bit buggy, but what i'd like to see is not generated notes, but notes that are actually relative to the song. that would make it a lot better. There are also some problems in custom mode. it's a fun idea to play on your own songs, but i am playing hundreds of notes while it isn't even started. i think it's better if you remove it, then when it's kinda lacking in relativeness thing.

[Platform w/Music]

The legs...

The legs need to be walking on the cross when you look in the movie clip.
also add grav++ or something (or other variable that declares gravity)
good animation, it´s totally ok for your second try, but try not to submit so much. you should be working like a month or two weeks on something, then look at it. how much would i vote if it werent mine? Well good luck.

jackkyboy responds:

the legs do move actually, you just cant see them due to the platform having some issues, But im working on a knew game currently, that will take a good amount of time longer