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I don't like this.

The graphics and the gameplay both are rather bland.
After a while the game gets really repetive and boring.
It also seems like actionscript copied from some tutorial, as i've seen alot of these games. Yet i kept in mind, that you may just have made this all by yourself, as i still give you a five out of ten. Next time you make such a game, at least make the graphics somewhat more interesting and add some powerups and variation.
Next time try using some more colors. You don't seem to know that the use of only black and white mostly bores the player.
It rather bothers me that you didn't read any NG Forum rules, as you posted a thread a while ago, advertising this game. Which is, of course, violating the rules of the BBS (forum).
I really suggest you do something with criticism with in this post and the ones below.
Good luck!
5/10 and 2/5.

Kirl responds:

No tutorial Pokeman, some people still read books, they contain more general knowledge. You can apply this knowledge in everyday life, in much the same way that you don't.

I suggest you read through the forum rules once or twice yourself as you seem to make them up as you go. You can read through them here: http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/rules.h tml

[Graffiti The Mona Lisa]

I agree with azreth...

i don't know how you managed to spent a whole week making this,
It's a low-res picture of the mona lisa with a (probably) copy and pasted code, you should have added color or something, brush size, opacity, that stuff.
I don't see how this is fun. Spent some more time, or at least let your flash have some features that other flashes don't have. be original.

tomashcu responds:

yeah... i on y worked on it for like 10 mins a day ahahah thats why

[Zap Brian]

Nice little game.

This shows your capable of making a decent flash, as you did everything by yourself.
But, you'll have to make something bigger then this to pass the good ol' judgement.
Your good, however it's just to small.
Have patience, my friend, make something bigger, and you'll get a >3.00 score.

peteybizzle responds:

Thanks for the input, good sir. With any luck, this just represents my first toe in the waters of flash gamery. I just wanted to test the waters, see what I could do before I attempted anything too big. Of course, now that I've done so...

[Platform w/Music]

The legs...

The legs need to be walking on the cross when you look in the movie clip.
also add grav++ or something (or other variable that declares gravity)
good animation, it´s totally ok for your second try, but try not to submit so much. you should be working like a month or two weeks on something, then look at it. how much would i vote if it werent mine? Well good luck.

jackkyboy responds:

the legs do move actually, you just cant see them due to the platform having some issues, But im working on a knew game currently, that will take a good amount of time longer

[Donzy's Platform Tutorial]

Click on the button to see the end product...

And you can't move. and also, everyone knows that it won't be fun if you got just a rectangle to move on, and then jump on the other rectangle, and then walk on the coins and then jump on the other rectangle... did you ever seen a game like that?

Donzy responds:

no, with the codes, you can use the brush. It doesn't have to be a straight terrain.
Also about the end product, it was a typo. It was meant to say W,A,S, and D to move! SORRY I FIXED IT!

[Platformer Tutorial]

Im very new to making games with flash...

How do you get the animations "jump" "run" and "standing" in just 3 frames, makes 1 frame each? do you have to make 3 different movieclips? and then you have to draw ground, in each frame (for the mc's) one? or only the first frame?
i'll just make my character un animated till i get answers.

chunkycheese12 responds:

You create an empty movieclip (CONTROL+ F8) And animate inside that. Then you make them 3, put them inside another movieclip and put the actions on that. The ground is a completely different movieclip. If this still doesn't help, just PM me.