Pippatchu's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Slimez]

Nice!

Just saw your newest flash (read my review), you made some improvements with frame by frame, and it was too short. Usually flashes made in 1 day or less suck, but this one is great! You made great use of sound effects. good animation. well, you are almost better then me and i work with flash for over 2 years.

masteronage responds:

ok nice to hear that :)
i still dont know how flash specially wurks but
i hope that i can learn that from my school (after summer)
bcouse the special effect and that things is too hard
for me (sorry for language come from holland) - that makes it hard too :p

[A goombas misadventures]

Not bad, however

Quote:
P.S.S. please remember that this is the first of my submissions so it's far from perfect.
I work with flash over 2 years (i started at age 9, then let it fall some months, then started when i was 10, and now im 12) and i didn't submit anything. Why? cause im not good enough to submit a flash. Just train and train and when you got a masterpiece, submit it.
Not all flashes are masterpieces, you may think. But people love masterpieces, not that [KKK] and [DD] stuff. What i also hate are maze games. we got like 250 maze games already. and they are all boring. Here are my ratings:
Art: 3
Animation: 4
Fitting music: 6
Sound effects: blank, did not appear here.
Originality: 7
Jokes: 6
Originality of jokes: 7
Overall: 7/10 and 3/5. i wish you succes on your next flash!
It's quite funny, i've drawn exactly your style when i was a beginner at flash.
now i draw with a tablet and draw more details and a way smaller brush.

NatetheG responds:

This was the first one I made in a class I'm taking and the teacher never really showed how to trim music or really add sound effects. So, I just submitted it to see how well it did and to see what i needed to improve upon. (other than the art.)

[The One True King]

clocks

ending was lol
couldn't find the easter egg
It was best plot ever
end of the review

CorpseGrinderClock responds:

hatchi matchi yi yi

[Cat Face 4]

Awesome!

I was waiting for this long time :D
Please make a part 5! i love Cat Face series!

[zZKirbyZz Dance]

Actually somewhat nice.

It's better than my first, i guess.
But you need a +0.13 if you don't want this to get blammed.
By the way, please don't call it My Fist Newgrounds Video. Or say it's in any way your first video. It somehow get's a better score. 3/5 6/10.

RareKirbyStarBall2 responds:

changed it. flash is hard O.o btw i make better videos on youtube

[spaceship-exampl]

This one is better!

Pretty much better than your other flashes.
did you even make it? (the flash)

[david & noe's crappy adv1]

NG is not a contest for having the most flashes.

QUOTE!!!:!:!:!:!:!:
and keep in mind: this was made in 15 min
JEEZ DONT KEEP SUBMITTING WHEN IT ISN'T NICE! KEEP WORKING ON SOMETHING NICE BEFORE YOUR NEXT SUBMISSION!
I mean: most flash pro's work on something a whole season before submitting!
i know you aren't pro but wow! 15 min isn't that a little short?
helpfull section:
Try working more on your flash.
You've had much submissions, please make something so good, that you can be proud of it. Newgrounds is not a contest for people having the most flashes.
Well keep it up!

mmautrey responds:

i like to think of it more as a race.

[unappropriate and old]

You have to train with flash..

You have very much submissions with almost on every author comments you say: im expecting a blam im shocked if this would stay no shock if it is blammed
Try making something that wouldn't make you expect a blam!
FINISH SOMETHING BEFORE SUBMITTING TO NEWGROUNDS!
DO YOU LIKE HAVING 8 SUBMISSIONS WITH SCORE <2.00?
IF I SUBMIT SOMETHING, I WANNA MAKE SURE I GET A SCORE OVER 9000!
ps. yes, i know. where exactly over 9000?

mmautrey responds:

k. got it

[completely dumb]

?!?!?!?

It's a flash with some grimmerish langauge and bleep sounds. not to forget - a head that falls off!!!!!! ZOMG UR PRO!
NICE JOB!! *EPICLY SADDISTIC COUGH*

mmautrey responds:

yeah

[Salad Weebl]

Great idea...

But just the same as the first weebl 'n bob episode.
well it's some nice timing you did, cause it's the same audio as weebl 'n bob ep. 1.
Didn't you stolen the .fla file and changed the movie clips of weebl 'n bob, and changed the background music???
6/10 3/5